Hey Katherine, I think you did a good job at grabbing my attention with your elevator pitch. I was also interested in your service about grouping people up. The only thing I would critique about your video is the speed at which you spoke. I think if you spoke a bit faster, you would’ve been able to get a lot more out. Other than that, you did well and it’s only an issue that gets fixed with practice.
Hey Katherine, I think you did a good job at grabbing my attention with your elevator pitch. I was also interested in your service about grouping people up. The only thing I would critique about your video is the speed at which you spoke. I think if you spoke a bit faster, you would’ve been able to get a lot more out. Other than that, you did well and it’s only an issue that gets fixed with practice.
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