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2) I hadn't really gotten much feedback on my first elevator pitch. Most critiqued on the speed of my speech. I could agree with this comment because I did try to slow down my speech in order to be understandable. I was also advised that if I spoke a little faster I would be able to add more information within the pitch without increasing the length of time. I thought this was really important.
3) Based on my advice to speak faster I tried to utilize that in this elevator pitch. I also added prices which I did not in my first pitch. This would allow my audience to get an idea on how I would ensure financial profit within my service.
Hi Katherine,
ReplyDeleteI think that your new elevator pitch is excellent and you showed improvement in comparison to your last one. Explaining your financial expectations is definitely a must if presenting this concept to potential investors because as great as an idea sounds, investors may be hesitant to take on the product if they don’t see the financial benefits. Also, the inclusion of the statistics of college drop out rates was a great point to add because it shows there is a target audience.